I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson and Mrs Fisi'iahi.
Showing posts with label Recount. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Recount. Show all posts
Friday, 25 October 2019
Writing
LI: to revise the structure of a recount reaffirm the marking criteria.
The structure of a recount is TREE. TREE stands for Title, Reveal, Events and Ending. We had to write an imaginative recount about winning a sports game. We had to write this imaginative recount in test conditions. We couldn't talk to anyone, or search anything up. First we got time to do some planing then we had 40 mins to write our recount. My story was about winning a race tournament, after writing the recount we had to mark our own work. I marked my recount as a 29, next time I will try and improve.
Friday, 15 February 2019
Writing
LI:To plan a write recount
To plan a recount LS1 got into groups and wrote about the number we got from our teacher. We wrote about what we knew about the number. Next we made individual plans for our holiday recount. In LS1 we use TREE for our writing. TREE stands for Title, Reveal, Events and Ending. That means when ever we write a story or recount we us TREE.
My Writing: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1om6uI89RHKv8NEhDKCy1kGhk79IQwfEy6rwXXZ2n6LU/edit?usp=sharing
To plan a recount LS1 got into groups and wrote about the number we got from our teacher. We wrote about what we knew about the number. Next we made individual plans for our holiday recount. In LS1 we use TREE for our writing. TREE stands for Title, Reveal, Events and Ending. That means when ever we write a story or recount we us TREE.
My Writing: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1om6uI89RHKv8NEhDKCy1kGhk79IQwfEy6rwXXZ2n6LU/edit?usp=sharing
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