Writing

LI: to revise the structure of a recount reaffirm the marking criteria.
The structure of a recount is TREE. TREE stands for Title, Reveal, Events and Ending. We had to write an imaginative recount about winning a sports game. We had to write this imaginative recount in test conditions. We couldn't talk to anyone, or search anything up. First we got time to do some planing then we had 40 mins to write our recount. My story was about winning a race tournament, after writing the recount we had to mark our own work. I marked my recount as a 29, next time I will try and improve.