LI: to use transitional vocab.
This week we have been revising explanation writing. Next week is our assessment week so we did this collaborative challenge to remind ourselves what is needed when we write explanations...
Something I really enjoyed learning about TEEL (Topic introduction, Explanation, Evidence, Linking).
Hi Ong!,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed listening to your group's explanation and learning about why it's important to use our PBS Care Values. I really like how your explanation was clearly and confidently read out in the vocaroo. In my opinion, next time try to explain more about what you did for this task and the language features you used in your explanation.
What was something you found interesting during the process of writing this explanation?
Great Work!
Thank Sakina for the commenting on my blog I really enjoyed reading your feedback and I will make sure I fix the mistakes.
DeleteThe thing I found interesting was learning about the structure of a paragraph. Before I didn't know anything about the structure of a paragraph and it was fun to do.
Sakina do you have any other advice about my blog post?
DeleteHi Ong!,
ReplyDeleteThank you for answering my question. I like how you improved in your writing. Besides explaining more about your task and language features you used, there's nothing else to fix.
Awesome Work!